Learning Activities

Click the play button below to watch the Fighting Wordiness video.


  1. Discuss the challenges you encountered with the LP5 Ghostwriting Assignment.

  2. Identify the greatest challenge you encountered, and write at least three ways you can work through that challenge next time you are asked to write a letter.

  3. Search the Internet for "pompous statements." Develop a list in class of pompous statements, and revise the statements using simple, clear language.

  4. View the Plain Language in Paperwork video. Take notes during the video, and discuss what you feel at the three most important or surprising points from the video.

  5. Chapter 14 about "Editing for Clarity, Conciseness, and Completeness."

  6. Complete the CheckUp Activities in Chapter 14.

  7. Review LP5 Ghostwriting Letters in class, and provide constructive criticism to enhance your and your colleagues' letters.

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